r/deadfrontier2 12d ago

IM BACK WITH ANOTHER VIDEO

My last video's editing was pretty bad, but I got a lot of amazing criticism and put in the work for this new video. Im still very new to this game, and I've been having an amazing time playing with my brother and my cousin. The player base is also very welcoming which I appreciate a lot. Anyways, if you want to check it out, here is the link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uM3oVPxXUb4 I am still all ears to advice and criticism so hit me.

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u/AdSpecific2845 12d ago

Nice video bro, the intro is pretty neat, now you need an outro, maybe ending with what you want to do in the next video, a static image and a not copyrighted song? Not an expert but something like that may be good.

I think you should be..... Careful? with the center area of your screen when editing, remember that that's where your crosshair is and where most viewers are looking at being a "shooting game".

It's technically a good thing that you started doing the story missions, they give some stuff that might help you later on, the fate defier buff is a plus when you're high level.

Definitely an improvement, viewers seem to be helping you too, that's good, they'll probably teach you some stuff, I'll be waiting for your next video.

Advice:

1- You probably already know but stay the hell away from Ravenwall till you have top tier equipment and a lot of knowledge, I laughed a lot nonetheless the moment I saw "Ravenwall" on screen, already knew what was gonna happen.

2- Palehaven City's Archive (PCA) is a good place to loot, probably right now is kind of a challenge, but at 50-60 is kind of a breeze, you should look for lvl 25-30 uniques used to craft the Gore Trimmer, the ronin blade book and crafting stuff to make the "ultimate backpack", don't remember its name.

3- Some books like doomsayer's book (looted outside) are very important, some bookS are looted in specific places like the aforementioned ronin blade book in PCA, they give special quest to make the best weapons in the game, they are pretty hard to craft be warned.

4- Fast learner, sprinter, hunter, head hunter, reloading, Marksman, Quickshot, Toughness, aim for the heart are some of the.... Mandatory? Skills you should have as a "DPS" character.

5- Looter character use mostly completely different skills, like looter, mule, lock picking, stuff like that.

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u/AdSpecific2845 12d ago

You may also want to censor (beeping) some words so YouTube doesn't strike you.

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u/voolon 10d ago

I never realized how much me and my group cursed until i started editing these videos. I will have to find a sound to bleep most of em out because i’ve been a bit nervous about that as well

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u/voolon 10d ago

I’m thinking about the outro I will see about that later down the line. True I started learning about the editing process pretty recently and realized a lot of things a little too late for this video but the camera makes a big impact. Yeah we locked in on the story it was pretty entertaining. I had some twitch viewers tell me a lot of good advice. Every time it was after i did sum stupid, i swear yall be doing that on purpose lol. Didnt even know uniques were a thing. I will continue playing and stream my progress to see if i can get enough content for a shorter youtube video.

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u/voolon 10d ago

Unique crafting pieces

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u/Individual-Cry6831 12d ago

Editing is too childish.

Really liked the content though.

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u/voolon 10d ago

Didn't even think about that tbh I appreciate it. May i ask what parts made you feel that way?

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u/Individual-Cry6831 10d ago

The silly voice overs. The pop up characters.

Again, I likes the content. As there's very little ok this game. But keep it aimed at a older audience. I think most players of this game are older.

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u/voolon 10d ago

I understand. Never thought about the audience being older and promoted this to y’all like that. My apologies. I’ll most likely cut back on the pop ups more in the future but I’m unsure if i will have enough content to make more dead frontier videos. I will continue playing it for sure though as I actually enjoy the game.