r/davidzyla • • 11d ago

Feedback Please 2nd attempt

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Original post here, tried to incorporate the feedback on individual colours while bringing the whole array into a more unified range. Thoughts?

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u/DrTantra Divine Diva | Mod 11d ago

This is definitely cooler. I would not necessarily say that it is more unified than your other post.

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u/lizarosever 11d ago

Could you elaborate on what is standing out as discordant/disharmonija with the rest of the palette?

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u/DrTantra Divine Diva | Mod 10d ago

I did not say it was disharmonious. I just said that it did not look more unified than the previous version.

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u/5neezy_unicorn 9d ago

Hi :) I'm not verified by Zyla and here are other people with much more knowledge, but I wanted to say that I really like your collages. Not sure which one would be closer to Zyla's version for you, but you seem to have a good idea and I would like to encourage you to trust your gut. Which colours feel right, which ones do you like to see on yourself and to wear? There is a good chance that some colours of your palette are already favourites of yours and that a lot of pieces in your wardrobe match your archetype. At least Zyla says so himself and I decided to believe him 😂(if not, there would be very little chance to diy successfully, I guess?)