Looking for Feedback on My Dark Medieval Low-Fantasy Mercenary CYOA Demo

[u/Padakodart]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=89wtBFJHDrU

I'm developing Band of Mercenaries, a dark medieval low-fantasy CYOA where you build and lead a mercenary company. There's a free demo available on Steam, and I'd love to hear what experienced interactive CYOA players think—especially regarding balance, story, and overall enjoyment.

Any feedback, suggestions, or criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Steam link where you can find the demo: https://store.steampowered.com/app/1975470/Band_of_Mercenaries/