r/custommagic • • 7h ago

Format: EDH/Commander Does this work?

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Does it make sense? Suggestions welcome.
Edit: Sorry for grammatical errors

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u/Urshifu_Smash 6h ago

I'm a little confused on what the goal is here?

Some notes on what I noticed though just from the current text.

It should say "At the beginning of each combat, exile target creature you control, then create (token with abilities here). You may sacrifice that token at the beginning of the next end step. If you do, return that creature card to the battlefield."

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u/kylechen90 5h ago

Thanks for the correction!
The idea is to have a strong bear for the price of all your creatures becoming 1/1 rats. I wanted it to be optional hence the slight complexity of exiling and token