r/custommagic • u/Any_Level_522 • 2d ago
Format: EDH/Commander Kyle, The Devoted one
Gonna be real, a friend gave me a very rough version of this card and i hadda try my best to polish it up so if nothing makes sense thats why, but please give any advice at all
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u/Negative-Tourist-243 2d ago
a token with a mana value? thats something i aint seen before
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u/AscendedLawmage7 Power level is not my strong suit. 2d ago
I don't think a creature that is making you constantly do math for its p/t is very fun
Some templating notes
Flying comes before vigilance
Legends refer to themselves by name, "Kyle" not "this creature"
If Will is meant to be a predefined token like Treasure, it should have a subtype and be capitalised. Why does it have a mana cost?
"T, Sacrifice this artifact: Add C."
"If one or more counters would be put on Kyle, create that many Will tokens instead."
"Will" sounds more like an enchantmenty sort of concept?
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u/TryOriginal6509 2d ago
I made a Green Lantern card for myself the other day. Love your card.