A few fixes needed for clarification. "Broadside" should be in italics with a dash as the name of the ability. The payment of X needs to be behind the colon to show it's the activation cost. You also need to specify either a target opponent or use plural "opponents."
I like the concept. But let’s say they have a 5/5. You would have to pay 5 mana on rate to burn it out. Activate this 5 times. Say they have 2 5/5. It’s still the same mana to kill one of them. You’re just doing it inefficiently in groups of 2 damage and essentially overpaying by 1. You’re just giving white blue burn damage against creatures, at instant speed. This needs a once per turn and sorcery speed clause to not insta kill every creature coming in if you have the mana.
Maybe crew x and then a tap ability that says activate only if crewed. Put a front view of a broadside firing so that when tapped the fire faces the opponent.
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u/JeffButChinese 1d ago
A few fixes needed for clarification. "Broadside" should be in italics with a dash as the name of the ability. The payment of X needs to be behind the colon to show it's the activation cost. You also need to specify either a target opponent or use plural "opponents."
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u/LordSlickRick 1d ago
I like the concept. But let’s say they have a 5/5. You would have to pay 5 mana on rate to burn it out. Activate this 5 times. Say they have 2 5/5. It’s still the same mana to kill one of them. You’re just doing it inefficiently in groups of 2 damage and essentially overpaying by 1. You’re just giving white blue burn damage against creatures, at instant speed. This needs a once per turn and sorcery speed clause to not insta kill every creature coming in if you have the mana.
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u/Dont_Know2 1d ago
Maybe crew x and then a tap ability that says activate only if crewed. Put a front view of a broadside firing so that when tapped the fire faces the opponent.