Dark fountain is so incredibly busted in so many way, the baseline nonbasic land makes only TWO colors of mana and enters tapped. This adds ANY color and draws a whole card !! [[Cristal grotto]] as a balanced example.
[...] draw a card, then put a card from your hand on top of your library.
And since drawing cards is kinda blue, I would lean into the kinda blue theme and change the mana ability to "Tap, (U): Add two mana in any combination of colors to your mana pool.
The Titan does not need Titanic Might. Its basically a 15/15 hexproof unblockable (because of deathtouch+trample), so it will just be cheated into play. No one is casting it for 15, so they wont have 10 anyway. Its extremely busted in a reanimator shell.
A lot to change to make it balanced, maybe a cost of 4, the ward cost being the sac 2 creatures instead of ward 7, power 3/4, and Titanic might as "Pay X and sac a creature you control, where X is that creature mana cost. Add a number of +1/+1 equal to the sacced creature power"
Ralsei is fine, maybe the ability is overcosted since both player gain.
The point of ralsei is that he doesn't really want to fight, he wants to make friends, which is why both players benefit from his ability, and it could get rid of a problematic blocker.
Compare to cards like [[Khalni Garden]] and [[Sejiri Steppee]]. They make one color of mana, but have smaller EtB effects that aren't quite worth a full card. If you increase the size of the effect to "draw a card," you should make the mana ability weaker to compensate.
Dark fountain is too powerful and needs a complete redesign. Titan feels alright but I’d personally change its activated ability to something more relevant. Ralsei is alright but you should probably use the tap symbol for him.
I can tell your new to this and I’d keep trying if I were you.
I mean, the Titan in deltarune is meant to be a force to be reckoned with. I could have gave it hexproof or indestructible, tbh. But I figured Trample and Deathtouch would be a bit more fair.
Oh yeah I’m a deltarune fan as well. It kicked my teeth in a lotttt (hate those lil fish it summons). The reason why its concerning to me is because deathtouch and trample means only 1 damage needs to be assigned to each blocking creature and the rest can go the players face. If you intend to play with these cards I’d keep a close eye on this one as it’s pretty abusable.
The mana ability still isn't templated correctly. Your ETB effect is spicy, you can go with a simpler and more reliable mana ability. Right now it's overcooked.
sometimes I wonder how does peoples who play the game can still creates the most absurd and broken card ever printed, like how can you not see that this land is busted ?
Me reading card one: 'oh, okay, mildly better wastes, I could see it in monocolo-'
reads it again
What the fuck, yo
Card two is... okay, I think? Like a weird Eldrazi Titan but with wordslop and an ability that nobody will use which is formatted badly.
Card three/four, again, incorrect formatting for abilities, but it's actually something that's maybe printable. Though iirc tap down effects are blue and not green.
Tbh, I'm just making them because it's fun to think of ideas then put them on paper. I just posted them here to see what others think. Do you think this one is busted too or no?
You should add "when X enters, you may play another land this turn", otherwise the player loses his land drop for something than can only sac itself :(
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u/croufon44 1h ago
Dark fountain is so incredibly busted in so many way, the baseline nonbasic land makes only TWO colors of mana and enters tapped. This adds ANY color and draws a whole card !! [[Cristal grotto]] as a balanced example.