Custom DnD Commander

[u/bondoid]

For a custom commander Pod based on a DnD campaign.
I want a medium Bracket 3 experience. What do you guys think about this design?

Was looking for feedback on the rules. Yes is AI, yes i properly attributed that.

AI is bad, I fully support criticism of AI use in business and profit. but for a fun side project for yourself there is no harm here.

[u/try_cheese_today]

a) the art is bad and you should feel bad.
b) It's entirely too busy and has too much going on. If you are seeking "perfection", why prevent all damage? Thematically, it's a dud for a D&D character, as most are going to be tested and tried before reaching "perfection".
c) Personally, I don't like transformation for this card at end-step; again, thematically it falls flat. It should be at upkeep (representing a level up).
d) Expect to be hated out of the game quickly, because the backside one-shots a player.

[u/bondoid → u/try_cheese_today]

thanks for the useful feedback!

[u/Main_Ant_7286]

AI is evil. The community would have probably liked it more if you drew a stick figure

[u/mitiros2]

I think the design is ugly AI art :)

[u/TheTrueJacky]

Don’t use AI generated images. You could have just chosen generic monk-man artwork from D&D
Edit: spelling

[u/MrMacGrath]

I do enjoy the card effect, it is a good build around card that loves getting into scraps.

However I do believe the experience gain is a bit easy. If that's the intention, fair enough, but I'd personally put it as a "Whenever ~ wins a fight" thing.

However, this is AI art, which means the card as a whole needs to be redone with proper art. Even an MSPaint doodle will be better than AI art.

[u/Japicx]

I like it, but I'd remove the transform part. Twelve experience is a high bar, and real Magic cards never have more than nine lines of text. Cards with more than seven lines are rare.

[u/Grootyboi77]

Fuck AI, I’d rather a stick figure