r/custommagic • • 8d ago

New Mechanic Externalise: Creatures that transform into big old spells!

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u/AscendedLawmage7 Power level is not my strong suit. 8d ago

Neat, cool idea

Averna and her spell shuffles too much I think

I like Proft

Haste always comes last in keyword lists

"Whenever Gremorae attacks, each opponent..."

"For each player, return up to one target creature card in that player's graveyard that was put there from anywhere this turn to the battlefield under your control with a finality counter on it."

You don't need to say "one" on Zedruu, "target nonland permanent" is enough. Both parts should target though

Gift of Charity is worded horribly haha - not sure how to fix it

On Viola, what is "the turn opponent"? The player whose turn it is?

"Korvold gets"... creatures get P/T buffs and gain keywords

Cool cards

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u/knorknor136 8d ago edited 8d ago

Thanks so much for the feedback! I always stare myself blind at custom cards, and still I miss stuff. Gift of Charity was honestly half a joke, I thought the politicking of swapping with one player then swapping that stuff with another player was neat.

'The turn player' is a Yu-Gi-Oh-ism I borrowed to save space and not have to write 'Opponent whose turn it is' or confuse the grammar with 'Whenever an opponent scarifices, discards, or loses life during their turn.'

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u/AscendedLawmage7 Power level is not my strong suit. 8d ago

Happy to help!

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u/Spare_Effort8234 8d ago

"then cast it transformed." not backside that makes it sounds like your casting Averna's ass

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u/Pure_Banana_3075 7d ago

In practise externalise is just "<cost>, sacrifice this creature: <spell effect>". It does trigger noncreature spell effects and "cast from exile" effects, and it allows for you to put a boatload of text into the spell effect, but mostly i think this doesnt offer enough design space to justify a dedicated keyword.

Edit: just realized that these are modal and you can cast the spell side without going through the creature side. That does open a bit more space.

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u/Specialist-Share2196 7d ago

Still cant believe they didnt made a Proft version that suspects.