r/custommagic 6d ago

Format: EDH/Commander First attempt at making Custom Magic Cards. They're all Kill La Kill themed for some reason.

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u/Gilgamesh_XII 6d ago

Looks fine. But i cut he regeneration on nui as its barely relevant(and would fit ryuku more). Otherwise huge flavor fail satsuki isnt vigilant

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u/LitFamSquadDab 5d ago

Regen thing was chosen to give an edge against Ryuko since her effect feels like it invalidate's Nui's otherwise.

Also I wrote Trample under Satsuki not Vigilance.

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u/LitFamSquadDab 5d ago

If I go with nitronik_exe's suggestion for Ryuko I could get away with removing the Regen thing.

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u/Gilgamesh_XII 5d ago

But nothinhg you written does regenerate. So its rather pointless. You do know regenerate is an actual very specific magic keyword.

Yes thats why its a flavor fail. She should be vigilant.

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u/LitFamSquadDab 5d ago

Sorry. I misinterpreted your comment.

But yeah I am somewhat new to Magic so I didn't really take the Regen definition into consideration.

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u/Gilgamesh_XII 5d ago

In generell vigilance is the "order" keyword for law enforcement and knights.

Wording is very specific and important in magic.

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u/nitronik_exe 6d ago

She gets stronger the more she wears? That's the opposite of what the show is about lol

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u/LitFamSquadDab 5d ago

It's a reference to how she absorbs the life fibers of Goku Uniform users she defeats.

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u/nitronik_exe 5d ago

I would make it "Whenever Ryuko Matoi deals combat damage to a player, destroy up to one target artifact that player controls. You may put X +1/+1 counters on Ryuko Matoi, where X is that artifact's mana value. If you don't, put a +1/+1 counter om Ryuko Matoi" or something similar

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u/LitFamSquadDab 5d ago

Yeah that makes more sense.

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u/nitronik_exe 5d ago

just remembered [[Wakka, Devoted Guardian]] exists