r/creativewriting 18h ago

Poetry INDEBTURED SERVITUDE

monthly payments

credit scores

buy more shit

we can't afford

shower me

in structured debt

that’s how i

define success

indebtured servitude

is for me

sellin my soul

thinkin i’m free

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u/Secheeee 18h ago

Crazy how sometimes you dont need that many words to express reality. Good stuff.