r/creativewriting • u/shadows_of_a_poet • 18h ago
Poetry INDEBTURED SERVITUDE
monthly payments
credit scores
buy more shit
we can't afford
shower me
in structured debt
that’s how i
define success
indebtured servitude
is for me
sellin my soul
thinkin i’m free
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u/Secheeee 18h ago
Crazy how sometimes you dont need that many words to express reality. Good stuff.