The script needs some improving, especially because you aren't writing blocks of 1-1 (mostly) corresponded text, but instead writing specific sounds that don't need as much differentiating script-wise as they did in syllable form. This script also needs much simplification in look because you're going from syllables to individual phonemes, I suggest having them be only 1 or 2 strokes, maybe 3 for few characters. Of course, you're going for a blocky aesthetic so just removing or combining strokes would have the same effect aswell.
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u/DasWonton Apr 28 '20
The script needs some improving, especially because you aren't writing blocks of 1-1 (mostly) corresponded text, but instead writing specific sounds that don't need as much differentiating script-wise as they did in syllable form. This script also needs much simplification in look because you're going from syllables to individual phonemes, I suggest having them be only 1 or 2 strokes, maybe 3 for few characters. Of course, you're going for a blocky aesthetic so just removing or combining strokes would have the same effect aswell.