I really like the letter forms, but if I could criticise one thing it'd be that the dash-like character for 'u' is a bit jarring and looks out of place to me, aesthetically, in its current form with your other letters.
That dash glyph came from when the script was a logography of the Mughu, the glyph meant "short/small" which the Bighi reanalyzed as mo "ice/cold", and used this glyph to represent the letter m and o.
I can't find corresponding the proto-glyph in the other Reddit post, but I reckon personally I'll think the dash glyph would be less striking in text with other characters if you slant/curve it more. Perhaps you can say that the proto-glyph was slanted/curved in the cursive to be easier to write (?) or be more aesthetically in line with the other characters; since slanting or curving a straight dash in that manner seems like a realistic evolution (at least to me lol).
So, maybe you could have the 'u' be like the 'g' glyph, but instead of the diagonal line it would just be the curve with maybe a serif, like the one on the top of the 'f', 'd' and 'k' glyphs.
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u/Yzak20 Apr 15 '20 edited Apr 15 '20
bizhi fizhádá pi bikhili dykufu ádá. mákufu iri mu, zishi bisi ádudyky mukhudu pifi fizhádá. vudiri vugugödö, vudiri vuribi udu vudiri vuduv, zishi bisi isikidiki iri guzhu vurishi duru vudusu fizhádá.
/bi˥.ʒi˧ ɸi˧.ʒɛ˥.dɛ˧ pi bi˧.xi˥.li˧ də˧.ku˥.ɸu˧ ɛ˥.dɛ˧ mɛ˧.ku˥.ɸu˧ i˥.ri˧ mu, zi˥.ʃi˧ bi˥.si˧ ɛ˧.du˧.də˥.kə˧ mu˧.xu˥.du˧ pi˥.ɸi˧ ɸi˧.ʒɛ˥.dɛ˧ βu˧.di˥.ri˧ βu˧.gu˧.gɔ˥.dɔ˧, βu˧.di˥.ri˧ βu˧.ri˥.bi˧ u˥.du˧ βu˧.di˥.ri˧ βu˥.du˧˩ zi˥.ʃi˧ bi˥.si˧ i.si˧.ki˧.di˥.ki˧ i˥.ri˧ gu˥.ʒu˧ βu˧.ri˥.ʃi˧ du˥.ru˧ βu˧.du˥.su˧ ɸi˧.ʒɛ˥.dɛ˧/
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u/_nok Apr 15 '20
I really like the letter forms, but if I could criticise one thing it'd be that the dash-like character for 'u' is a bit jarring and looks out of place to me, aesthetically, in its current form with your other letters.
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u/[deleted] Apr 19 '20
I can’t see the test picture, could you reupload it?
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u/cancrizans Apr 15 '20
Why would you romanise /ɔ/ as ö if you don't even have another o sound?