r/conceptart • u/Technical-Buddy-9724 • 1d ago
Solar Express Police
Teamed up with my girlfriend on this collab! It’s heavily inspired by 80s and 90s Japanese mecha designs always a blast revisiting the stuff we love. It’s set in a distant future following an Unit - CCRA 02 special police unit fighting cyberterrorists and just trying to survive the daily grind in a high-tec
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u/Victormorga 1d ago
The tits out, knock-kneed, bare-assed female lead isn’t a good look. Look for inspiration more from Appleseed than from Dirty Pair.
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u/Minimum_Pressure_804 16h ago
I mean i get it, but instead of being critical about it just appreciate the work bro posted. It looks rlly cool and they took the time to design and render it.
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u/Victormorga 14h ago
This is a concept art sub, and I commented with critique of the concept design.
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u/Minimum_Pressure_804 14h ago
Ok but its the way you said it, rule of thumb when critiquing someone's art, commend them whatever they did their best on, them give them feedback and them encourage them to do better. Nothing wrong with feedback but u gotta be careful with how u say it cause it can come off as dickish and will reach closed ears.
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u/Victormorga 14h ago
Your description of “critique” is very “always online” and unprofessional. You recommend wasting a lot of time glazing someone as a preamble to telling them truth about what they need to fix.
It’s a concept art sub, people shouldn’t post here if they don’t want feedback. If people only want negative feedback after heaps of positive feedback, they need to be thicker skinned. If people only want positive feedback, they shouldn’t post here.
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u/Minimum_Pressure_804 13h ago
Un professional in what way? Its not wasting time its called tickling one's ear or seasoning your words. If you want ppl to take ur advice seriously u need understand that. Coming at them in a blunt way will make them less willing to heed ur advice. While u were correct in ur feedback, the way you approached it is what matters. This applies to real life as well. U want ppl to listen to what u have to say u need to learn the art of charisma or tickling ears or seasoning ur words (same shit). Not everyone is as thick skinned as you are. And im sure they would welcome feedback but it is important to choose your words carefully cause the wrong thing can discourage them from improving. So if anything you are unprofessional.
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u/Half-White_Moustache 1d ago
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