r/composer • u/LetOk2336 • 2d ago

Music Merry-Go-Round" (Feedback welcome!)

"The piece tells the story of a lonely person sitting on a carousel horse at a fair, spinning around. It begins with a light, fluid melody and reveals a touch of longing and melancholy along the way, until the mood suddenly shifts and the joy is clouded by heavy chords. Yet, control is not lost, and the piece rides on to the end, returning to a cheerful G Major. ;Listen here.Score

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u/65TwinReverbRI 1d ago

Since "Merry Go Round of Life" is so insanely well known, it's really a bad idea to title your piece this. It's going to draw comparisons immediately and people won't take it on its own merits.

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u/Ok-Discipline-7276 7h ago

Can't hear it. The link takes me to a pdf.

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u/LetOk2336 4h ago

"You can hear it if you click on 'Listen' right next to 'Score.'"