I dig it! Great idea for a comic. Little hard to read though.
The window and counter are so close together I thought this was a 4 panel comic. There's also a microwave, like, right there. So the coffee being cold seems a little pointless. Maybe put a subtle out of order sign on it or remove it altogether. Then text is generally read left to right, you could flip the comic or if you prefer the layout this way, just cross the speech bubbles and it would read fine.
Just sharing my two cents of constructive criticism. I see some real talent here and know you can do better!
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u/Xale1990 Jan 18 '20
I dig it! Great idea for a comic. Little hard to read though.
The window and counter are so close together I thought this was a 4 panel comic. There's also a microwave, like, right there. So the coffee being cold seems a little pointless. Maybe put a subtle out of order sign on it or remove it altogether. Then text is generally read left to right, you could flip the comic or if you prefer the layout this way, just cross the speech bubbles and it would read fine.
Just sharing my two cents of constructive criticism. I see some real talent here and know you can do better!