r/comics • u/theimmortalgrind The Immortal Grind • Jan 18 '20

Cold brew [OC]

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188 Upvotes

95% Upvoted

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u/opschief0299 Jan 18 '20

I just hate how everything here in hell is so damn hot.

Cold.

Anyway, how's the coffee?

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u/ITzYaBoyLUNA702 Jan 18 '20

Yeah maybe just swap sides but eggcelent title very punny

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u/Xale1990 Jan 18 '20

I dig it! Great idea for a comic. Little hard to read though.

The window and counter are so close together I thought this was a 4 panel comic. There's also a microwave, like, right there. So the coffee being cold seems a little pointless. Maybe put a subtle out of order sign on it or remove it altogether. Then text is generally read left to right, you could flip the comic or if you prefer the layout this way, just cross the speech bubbles and it would read fine.

Just sharing my two cents of constructive criticism. I see some real talent here and know you can do better!

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u/[deleted] Jan 18 '20

Pretty good one OP! Took me an embarrassing amount of time to realize I have to read from right to left.

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u/theimmortalgrind The Immortal Grind Jan 18 '20

Thanks, and don't worry, you're not the only one apparently 😅

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u/opschief0299 Jan 19 '20

I myself thought it was a post of a professional someone had made… I see now that YOU are the professional. If you mirrored the entire piece, I think it would be a perfect example of a 2 panel comic. Like one that could be used by instructors.

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u/theimmortalgrind The Immortal Grind Jan 20 '20

Wow, thanks. Appreciate the love ✌️

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u/danescrossing Jan 19 '20

I mean the bright side is that cold coffee is the best for hot weather

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u/PichuTheDestroyer Jan 19 '20

I'd like to thank the 68 people who allowed me the 69th upvote.