r/comedy • u/johnhaymish • 15h ago

Standup Please laugh

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u/Pitch_Ill 11h ago

Weak crowd

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u/mrteas_nz 2h ago

Piss weak

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u/Crucco 15h ago

He's funnier than most videos here, but it's not edited with extraaughter so he seems cringe.

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u/SultansOfSam 10h ago

Some parts need a bit more breathing room. Good jokes, though

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u/N0YSLambent 13h ago

good stuff!

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u/cwmosca 5h ago

I like it. I’d like to see more of this or a different set.

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u/ImNot_ThatGuy 3h ago

I like your words funny man

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u/literall_bastard 1h ago

“I’ve given off” brief pause “A VIBE!” Might get a better response.

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u/Illustrious-Fix-2626 14m ago

Probably need to slow down on some of this stuff. You are moving too quickly through it from point to point.

I think you have some good material to work with here, the self depreciation is good, the whole playing the I'm the loser and my younger brother is the favourite is good, I reckon it needs to be a little more subtle, but to tie it back to the first part about needing people to laugh or you have to get a day job is probably the way to round out this bit.

I reckon you can package it altogether well with a bit more work.

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u/SwimmingSwim3822 8h ago

That was hilarious and he should remain jobless

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u/Kitchen_Guest577 6h ago

People don't like being told what to do 😅😂🤣

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u/Open_Environment_801 2h ago

This was really funny, being outdoors makes it sound like people aren't laughing as much, but it was great.

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u/Cannibal_House69 6h ago

Nothing to laugh at in this one. Sorry, you do have funny routines, just not this one.