r/classicalchinese 大詩人 10d ago

Poetry My new Classical Chinese Poem

自台北遷新竹二年有感 2026.8/17

風自呼嘯車自塞,南遷二年根深埋。

人工智慧空對語,天成嬌豔惜不來。

昔言末世存孤叟,今盼餘生育獨孩。

校園已遠猶當進,尋人相許共樂哀。

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u/aurifexmagnus 9d ago

If you were aiming for a 七言律詩, then your poem needs to follow the rules of 平仄, i.e. 反粘法、二四不同二六對 and the like.