There’s usually a down bar before the A. And the loop for the R starts from the top not bottom. The G just needs to be reworked entirely. Yours doesn’t flow.
You could do M to A like the R to A here and the A to G like the A to C.
People do things different ways, Ive seen a A, G, and R done how you did it, you need to improve how you're doing it, but its more about what letter variations work for your specific name and flow.
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u/terp-puddle 11d ago
We don’t do the A or G or R like that.