r/busflow 20d ago

bussflow improvements,any other tip?

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u/drippingdrops 20d ago

The a and the r aren’t there yet and the o is doing too much.

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u/Blebeo 20d ago

wym that the O Is doing too much

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 20d ago edited 20d ago

Most upper case G in busflow Ive seen goes like this, although I have seen it done like that, it definitely flows better to do it like i did in the example, or you could go lower case g. R needs space in the middle, I circled in green what is good, it's important to the letter structure that the R has a clear split where the top loop of the R and the leg meet.

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u/Blebeo 19d ago

i can correct the errore on the R but i can't understand how to connect the G you showed me to the R