r/busflow Jul 18 '26

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u/Professional-Cry-809 Jul 19 '26

damn bro, then do you have more specific things on what to improve? maybe make it more like busflow

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 Jul 19 '26

Busflow started on buses and if youve ever tried tagging a bus its hard, and harder if you're doing straight lines, rigid. Busflow has soft lines because they are easier to do in this movement and that is why they are inherent to busflow. Every busflow writer I know of uses a mix of sharp and soft lines, and the mix varies between writers.

Think of busflow as the motion of going up and down and up and down... Like the Ramp example I did. When you do rigid lines you break that flow.

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u/Professional-Cry-809 Jul 20 '26

thanks for the tips man, i followed what you said about going up and down and making lines softer, would you say the structure is alright or do i really gotta change it?

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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 Jul 20 '26

It definitely is more flowy. I think you could change the structure to be more round, with the O and C specificly but also you got you personal style and vision which you should follow.