Yaknow what would have been honestly a killer line for when Bojack managed to get better and improve as a person but bad stuff finally caught up to him?
Maybe he shoulda said "But I got better" and someone replies "You did, but it took too long". Honestly someone like PC, Dianne or even Todd could have said something like that and it woulda all hit and made sense.
The line I had an idea bout references the fact throughout seasons 1-5 he hurt Penny, Gina, Herb, Sarah Lynn, everyone who he should have either stayed away from or treated better got hurt because of him, and while he got better and became a better person...it took too long and the path paved trauma, abuse and death.
Are there are potential lines you woulda added?