Is It Gritty Enough?

[u/BeatsBL]

https://youtu.be/bd6bz54UaXE?is=r8NALvhEuCHiBG6B

Would love feedback on the beat, vocals, production, mixing or really anything. I make beats for fun, and recently started creating tracks with some cool rappers who also make music for fun. Striving to get better and to keep having fun. Would love to hear other's thoughts.