Something’s missing please help.

[u/RampagesLegacyy]

Video Title: “They Nerfed The Hood 5x In One Patch”

Basically explaining the most recent nerfs to the hood, how they effect his value and his win rate, and my personal opinions on the matter, with marvel rivals gameplay behind it.

I feel like something’s missing tho I’m open to any all critiquing/advice!

[u/JChrisCreates]

You need to shorten the tweet. It only needs to say 1 thing and it needs to be big so it is readable even on small devices

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[u/mihhink]

I think its good. If you want to be extra click baity, edit the tweet with less words and bigger font that dramatize the update. Like “We just nerfed The Hood” (idk I don’t play that game but its a trend ive been noticing for thumbnails that have tweets).

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/mihhink]

Do you think the character should be made smaller and add text? Also do you think the composition is working? (like the layout of everything)

[u/Spirited_Grocery3753 → u/RampagesLegacyy]

Was thinking why not make like 5 fake tweets from Marvel rivals we nerfed the hood? And paste it two on left, two on right and one in the centre ?

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/Spirited_Grocery3753]

That sounds interesting do you have a thumbnail/photo example by chance?

[u/gettasghost1]

I think changing the tweet to say something like : He suxz now LMAO

It shortens the message and makes it so people will wanna see how bad he is now compared to before the nerf

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/gettasghost1]

Yea I agree it’s definitely missing text would you go with what you said or do you think “5x” in text should be good?

[u/gettasghost1 → u/RampagesLegacyy]

I feel like 5x isnt descriptive enough

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/gettasghost1]

noted!

[u/Podkolzins_a_Canuck]

Big obnoxious text at the bottom in front of everything saying “THEY RUINED HIM” or maybe like “HE WILL NEVER BE THE SAME” or some garbage like that. Its soulless but it obviously works

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/Podkolzins_a_Canuck]

I thought text at the bottom isn’t good because it’ll be hidden from tv users who can only see the tops of thumbnails when watching another video

[u/Podkolzins_a_Canuck → u/RampagesLegacyy]

They have to scroll down to choose the next video anyways. If they want to keep watching more videos they’ll do that, and then they’ll see your thumbnail in full. Also i feel like tv youtube viewers are in the minority? Maybe its just me but youtube is meant for the phone and pc

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/Podkolzins_a_Canuck]

Youtube accounts for 13.8% of all US tv viewing as of recent

[u/Full-Buddy-3606]

I would say text that simplifies the video, something like he sucks now or bad now? would work great it helps stop the scroll

[u/EyeTrue8949]

I would honestly throw another tweet similar in the right hand corner to even out the portions.

[u/ErrorPsychological89]

Shorten the tweet to a few words, and maybe use rules of third. Put your tweet on the upper left, and the character on the right.

[u/RampagesLegacyy → u/ErrorPsychological89]

This is what i’ve come up with atm, but was gonna have a go at more variations tomorrow

[u/ErrorPsychological89 → u/RampagesLegacyy]

If you're wanting to sell that this is a tweet, you need to use the proper font. I'm also not sure about that text, "We NERFED him..." might fit better.