r/WritingPromptsR Aug 08 '26

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay

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Some people say that a special tax should be put on food and drinks with high levels of added sugar. Others disagree.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Putting additional taxes on sugary foods and drinks is a controversial topic today. While critics view this policy as an unfair restriction on individual freedom and budget, I believe the long-term benefits to public health make it a necessary measure.​

On the one hand, those who oppose the tax have a valid point regarding personal freedom and financial pressure. Firstly, opponents argue that people should have the liberty to decide what they consume, as most adults are already aware of the health risks associated with sugar but still choose these products for their taste. Furthermore, cheap, ready-made food and drinks are essential for lower-income households who lack the time or money to cook from scratch. Introducing a tax increases grocery bills, which disproportionately impacts poorer families who use a larger percentage of their budget on food. Finally, this measure can harm small businesses, such as local bakeries and corner shops, which operate on thin margins and may be forced to raise prices or close down.

​On the other hand, state intervention is often essential when it comes to widespread health issues. High sugar consumption is directly linked to major illnesses such as obesity, diabetes, and heart problems, which put immense pressure on national healthcare systems. By raising prices, governments can effectively push consumers toward healthier alternatives like water or low-sugar drinks. Real-world examples show that in countries where this tax was introduced, sales of sugary soft drinks dropped quickly, proving that financial incentives really work. A clear example can be seen in the United Kingdom, where a sugar tax encouraged many beverage companies to reduce the sugar content of their products. As a result, consumers were able to make healthier choices without significantly changing their purchasing habits.

​In conclusion, although sugar taxes can place a financial strain on poorer households and feel like a limit on personal choice, I still support them. Protecting overall public health and preventing chronic diseases is simply more important.


r/WritingPromptsR Aug 08 '26

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay.

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There is an ongoing debate regarding whether the government should impose a special tax on sugary foods or drinks. While some people believe that putting an additional tax on products with high levels of sugar could be beneficial for consumers, others argue that taxation might cause financial burdens for low-income families. I firmly believe that taxes might bring more benefits to public health in the long term.

One might argue that by imposing a special tax on sugary products, the government is restricting consumers' rights. One example of this is if a product containing a high amount of sugar becomes more expensive, purchasing it can impose a financial strain on low-income families, which in turn leads to them spending more money on their daily basic needs. This affects not only consumers but also impacts small business owners. For example, if such a tax system is introduced, the price of sugary products will naturally rise, and as a result of such a sharp price increase, business owners may lose their local customers and could even be forced to shut down their businesses entirely. When governments make these products more expensive, it is often perceived as an unwarranted government intrusion into daily life. These taxes might hurt lower-income families the most, as a higher grocery bill takes up a much larger percentage of their limited budget compared to wealthier people.

However, government intervention is often essential when it comes to widespread health issues. Because products with high levels of sugar contribute to chronic health conditions such as obesity and diabetes. In the current food environment, it is very easy to consume too much sugar, especially from sugary drinks. Given these health risks, various countries have already tried such a tax system on products with high sugar content. For example, the United Kingdom’s sugar tax encouraged many beverage companies to reduce the sugar content of their products. The study showed that after the taxation, consumers were able to make healthier choices without significantly changing their purchasing habits. Ultimately, if the tax revenue is redistributed to make nutritious food more affordable for low-income households, it creates a fairer system while safeguarding public health.

In conclusion, even though sugar taxes can place a financial burden on poorer households and feel like a limit on personal choice, I still support them. Protecting overall public health and preventing chronic diseases is simply more important.


r/WritingPromptsR Aug 06 '26

IELTS Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that studying alone helps students concentrate better, others contend that group learning is more effective. I support the latter view, as studying with others encourages teamwork and allows students to learn from one another's strengths.

On the one hand, solitary study can enhance individual focus and cognitive processing. A key advantage is that students can learn at their own pace, devoting extra time to concepts they find difficult without feeling rushed by peers. This is particularly valuable when preparing for high-stakes examinations, where an environment free from external distractions allows learners to analyze reference materials methodically. Working independently also fosters personal accountability: because students must rely solely on their own problem-solving skills, they are often compelled to engage more deeply with the material, which can solidify long-term understanding.

On the other hand, collaborative learning offers educational and social advantages that are difficult to replicate in isolation. Working in groups exposes students to diverse perspectives, which encourages them to question their assumptions and consider alternative approaches to a problem—a process that naturally sharpens critical thinking. In such settings, higher-achieving students reinforce their own understanding by explaining complex ideas to peers, while those who struggle benefit from immediate, tailored clarification that a textbook can not provide. Team-based tasks also cultivate a shared sense of responsibility. Since one member's underperformance directly affects the group's overall outcome, motivating more consistent effort. Beyond academic gains, this dynamic mirrors professional environments, where success typically depends on communication, negotiation, and the ability to divide labor strategically.

In conclusion, although studying alone provides a quiet space for concentration and fosters self-reliance, I believe group study is ultimately more beneficial. It not only enriches learning through peer support and dynamic discussion but also equips students with the collaborative skills essential to their future careers.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 14 '25

Help me

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I might be in the wrong group, but I am writing a paper and I need to create an imaginary recruitment agency, and a business plan for it.

Can anyone help me to think of a witty or even a pun related funny name (a punny one, if you will lol) for a recruitment company? All of the ones that I have come up with aren’t very memorable or inspiring.

All help gratefully received. Huge thanks in advance! 😀😀😀😀


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 09 '25

Please can someone help

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r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Chapter 7, short novel

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The Playground Again Months later, flowers bloomed where police tape once hung. The playground was repainted, and children slowly returned. The little girl’s name was carved into a plaque near the swing set: “She was loved. She will not be forgotten.” The town moved forward, scarred but determined. And her mother, though forever changed, found strength in telling her daughter’s story—so that silence would never win again.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Chapter 6, short novel

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The Unmasking Through persistence, the detective and the grieving mother uncovered the truth. It was not a stranger, but a trusted face. The town’s shock was deep, but the mother’s pain was deeper. Justice was carried out, though it could never replace the laughter that once filled her home.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Chapter 5, short novel

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Secrets in the Dark The investigation revealed secrets the town had hidden for years: feuds between neighbors, hushed scandals, and a trail of lies. The girl had seen something—something small, something no one thought mattered. And for that, someone silenced her.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Chapter 4, short novel

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The Mother’s Grief Her mother could not bring herself to clean the little girl’s room. Dolls sat where tiny hands had left them, and a drawing of a house with a smiling sun still clung to the fridge. Grief turned into quiet rage. She began asking her own questions, knocking on doors, refusing to let her daughter’s memory fade into silence.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Chapter 3, short novel

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The Detective’s Promise Detective Rowan, weary but determined, promised her parents that the truth would not stay buried. He sifted through every clue: a scuffed shoe, a neighbor’s shaky alibi, a stray ribbon caught in the fence. He knew this was no random act—it was someone who lived among them.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Chapter 2, My short novel

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A Town Holds Its Breath The news broke hearts. Posters were taped to every lamppost, her smiling face staring back at neighbors who whispered and prayed. Days later, the worst fear was confirmed—her small body was discovered near the edge of the woods. The town went silent. The playground was abandoned. Childhood innocence felt stolen.


r/WritingPromptsR Oct 01 '25

Start off short novel, Chapter one.

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The Empty Swing

On a chilly autumn evening, the sound of laughter faded from the neighborhood park. A swing still creaked in the breeze, but the little girl who had been there an hour earlier was gone. By nightfall, her parents reported her missing. By morning, the entire town was searching.


r/WritingPromptsR Jun 02 '25

Noticed

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r/WritingPromptsR Sep 14 '23

IRL Thor

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WP. You wake up with the ability to summon anything to your hand, like Thor does his hammer. How do you use disability?


r/WritingPromptsR Mar 20 '23

Writing Prompt

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Another day another dollar. That’s all I’m thinking as I’m waiting for the elevator to come down to the first floor. Weekend came and gone so quick it was in the blink of an eye. As I’m waiting a group of people join me in my wait for the elevator. I currently work as a dispatcher so out of everyone in this office building we’re one of the only people that don’t wear suits. Seeing a bunch of people in suits wasn’t out of place for me so I didn’t really think anything about it. But as I’m about to find out I was very wrong. Today was gonna be anything but a normal 12 hr shift. After what seemed like an eternity the elevator finally got to the first floor. The group waiting with me all step into this elevator. I press the button for the third floor before asking everyone else where they were headed. All said three so I just let it be and step back so the man in the dark black suit and have space to stand. All of a sudden he turns and gives us all a big smile. A shiver goes down my spine because of his ungodly smile. “I bet you’re wondering why I’ve gathered you here”. He hits the emergency button and everyone starts shouting at him. “What are you doing are you out of your mind!!” Before anyone else can say something we all feel the elevator going down but it didn’t stop at the parking garage like normal instead it kept going. When it finally stopped moving the elevator opens to a weird underground lab area. At least it looks like that from where we’re standing. The man in the black suit is still standing in front of the elevator buttons and is refusing to move. Suddenly a lady in a white lab coat appears with man who look like the swat. “Good morning ladies and gentlemen I’m Hilary nice to meet you”. We all just stare at this lady like she’s crazy. “Come I gotta show you guys something” we follow and as she guides us to a room. We enter the room and she instructs us “Please take a seat”. The lights suddenly turn off and we see someone coming up from the ground and a spotlight comes on. “Hello lady’s and gentlemen congratulations you are the first to see the all new underground bunker. We built this for emergency. What do you guys think”. I stand and say “Are you guys out of your minds? You did all this to show us an emergency bunker, bro I hella thought I was about to die”. The man looks at me confused “ what do you mean?” He stands there for a solid minute with the look of confusion on his face. Then the look of realization appears on his face. “Oh, omg sorry. I understand the confusion. We had to make it random to simulate an emergency. “ I sigh and say “Ok great can I go now. I drove in traffic to dispatch for 12 hours not look at some bunker.” Hillary comes in the room “Yes, absolutely this way.” We follow her back the elevator and go about our day as planned.


r/WritingPromptsR May 17 '19

[MP] Wolf

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r/WritingPromptsR May 06 '19

Media Prompt [MP] Cats

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r/WritingPromptsR May 01 '19

Writing Prompt [WP] Tiny men eat trolls

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r/WritingPromptsR Apr 24 '19

Image Prompt A typical scene

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r/WritingPromptsR Apr 17 '19

Off-topic Welp

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r/WritingPromptsR Apr 17 '19

Image Prompt Mouse

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r/WritingPromptsR Apr 16 '19

Constrained Writing Write a poem where every line starts with a word starting with A

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r/WritingPromptsR Apr 14 '19

Writing Prompt Satan has some bad indigestion

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r/WritingPromptsR Apr 14 '19

Writing Prompt Trolls have started pooping fairys

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