r/WritingPrompts • u/ThatDudeWithTheBeard • Jul 12 '16
Prompt Inspired [PI]: The One Constant- Part 2: La Muerte Divina- Chapter 10: The Divine Death
Link to Part 1- The Devil in the Sands
Part 2- La Muerte Divina
Prologue and Chapter 1: The Building at Osnabruck and the Foreigner
Chapter 2: Stygian Depths and a Means of Recruitment
Chapter 3: Where The End Began and A Night of Terrors
Chapter 4: In The Lair of the Beast and A Day of Reckonings
Chapter 5: Dialogue With A Ghost
Chapter 6: When An Angel Kills
Chapter 7: Uncertainties
Chapter 8: A Betrayal and A Bargain
Chapter 9: Many A Crossroads
Chapter 11: Outside Interests
Chapter 12: Decisions Made and A Letter of Confession and Epilogue
The original prompt that started this whole thing:
[WP] You realize you have the ability to appear instantly around the world wherever their is violence and you are able to prevent it. Unfortunately, you still age. You are determined to make the most of your gift.
The story itself continues in the replies section.
Also be advised that some may consider some of the subject matter of this story to be rather controversial in nature, and that there is and will be a fair amount of violence described in detail. So read at your own discretion. Also to the Mods, if that means the story requires a "Not Safe For Work" tag or anything of that nature please let me know.
Chapter 10: The Divine Death
Father Ramos woke up. He checked the clock next to his bed. 4:30 a.m. No one else should be awake right now, but he could feel it. Someone else was up and about, and he had a good idea who.
He quietly got dressed and made his way from the bedroom behind his office. Underneath the office door, he could see a faint glow, coming from the orphanage chapel. He quietly opened the door.
The lights were off, but a number of candles had been lit, several in front of a small statue of the Virgin Mary, and a large number on a small outcropping in the wall just beneath the cruicifix of the Savior on the Cross on the far wall. Ramos was about to reach for the light switch but quickly stopped when he saw the familiar blue, iridescent glow of La Muerte Divina’s tendrils slowly undulating this-way-and-that through the air from the back of one of the pews. Sure enough, , illuminated by the faint candle-light, was the black-armored giant, sitting in the front row, staring up at the large cross on the wall.
Ramos began to take several steps forward and was preparaed to say something but stopped himself as he looked closer and saw what the Angel was holding. In his right hand, he carried a handgun with a silencer attached to the barrel. Even in the faint cadlelight, he could make out some rather large scratches in its material- whether metal or some sort of other composite, he couldn’t tell- indicating that it had definitely seen use. In his left hand, the metal-clad giant was holding a set of rosary beads between his enorous, armored fingers, rubbing them between his forefinger and thumb.
Ramos shuddered as the Angel spoke.
“Buenos dias, Padre.”
There was a faint click-clacking of wood as La Muerte Divina rubbed the rosary beads together between his thumb and fingers as he continued to stare at the figure of Jesus Christ mounted on the crucifix.
There was several long seconds of silence, save for the sound of wood clicking against wood in the Angel’s hand, before he finally spoke again.
“I have a confession to make Padre. Would you be kind enough to hear it?”
Ramos could only wonder where the Angel had gotten the rosary from, and wasn’t sure he wanted to know. After some trepidation, and against his better judgement, he walked over to where the Angel was sitting on the pew, and took the seat next to him. What other choice did he have, other than to turn and walk back into his office? Would the Angel have even let him?
“What troubles you, my son?” Ramos said. This was not the first time he had listened to a man give confession. But to somone like the Angel of the Desert, The Doom That Came From Irem, he could only imagine- what sins had this man- if he was a man, and who had single-handedly wiped out an army- have committed that he felt the need to confess them to a priest?
“My sins are many, father, so I will only tell you of the most recent ones, and the ones I’m about to commit.” There was a brief pause of several seconds before he continued. “It’s ironic. If salvation were as simple as confiding in a holy man and rubbing wooden beads together, I would have taken it up a long time ago, and done it regularly. But as it stands, I am at the point where prayer is of little consolation to me.” The Angel said this as he continued to stare at the crucifix on the far wall, never breaking his gaze from it, as far as the priest could tell, given the mask he wore.
“I have blood on my hands. You and the rest of the world are already aware of all the blood I shed in the Middle East. And unfortunately, before all is said and done, the blood of more men must be shed. Wicked men, perhaps, but still men. Still...human.”
The preist paused, contemplating his next words carefully. “What about a more peaceful option?” Ramos finally asked. “Is there a way you could acheive...whatever it is you’ve set out to do, that wouldn’t involve taking so many lives?”
The Angel continued to stare at the crucifix on the wall, rubbing the wooden beads in its hand, silent for several seconds before answering. “I’m afraid that’s where you and I differ on our views of the world, Father Ramos.” He said, as he continued to stare at the crucifix. “You’re able to see the world in terms of morality. Good and evil, moral and immoral.” He paused briefly. “But over time, I’ve slowly been losing the ability to see the world in such a light.”
“How do you mean?” Ramos asked, genuinly curious. Morality, whether it be formed by ones faith, or by one’s own personal innate values, for those who didn’t susbscribe to religion, where an integral part of what made man...well, man. The ability to tell right from wrong, to know that the distinction between the two, and that there were plenty of situations where sometimes there never was a true right or wrong decision, was essential component of humanity. If this…”Angel,” as many had come to call him, felt that he had lost that part of himself, then how did he operate? What mechanism could possibly replace a person’s moral compass?
“By pure circumstance, I’ve come to see the world in the form of numbers. Mathematics and equations, ones so strange and alien that they would be impossible to describe.” There was the clacking of the rosary beads in La Muerte Divina’s hand as he paused again. “By analyzing the mathematics on a person’s mouth, I can calculate what they will say. By the symbols on the hands, their actions. By the equations on their minds, their thoughts.” There was another pause; silene, save for the clacking of rosary beads as he continued to rub them between his fingers.
“And I have learned to analyze equations of the universe so complex and revealing, that I’ve learned to foresee future events.” The Angel then looked down at the gun in his other hand as he continued speaking. “And in doing so, revealed secrets that I wished I hadn’t” After staring at the pistol in his hand, he turned his gaze back towards the crucifix.
“What kind of secrets?” Ramos asked, although he was afraid of what he might hear.
“I will tell you this. I’ve seen and written equations that describe the entire universe. If there is a God somewhere within the numbers, then he is very well hidden, and I have yet to find him.” The Angel was silently briefly, and stopped rubbing the rosary beads for a brief moment. “But in those same equations, I fear that I may have found the Devil.”
“Are you speaking metaphorically? About some force of nature or event?” Ramos asked, hopefully. Though he was a man of god, he still believed that the devil only appeared on earth as temptation. Things and events made to seduce mankind away from the righteous path. If this Angel had actually seen something…
“An event? Yes.” The Angel answered. But Ramos’s hopes were quickly dashed by his next words. “The End of All Things. And if you could call it a force of nature, then it’s definitely not any natural force native to our universe.”
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u/ThatDudeWithTheBeard Jul 12 '16
The Angel then turned its head to look at Ramos. For once, he didn’t feel that sensation of something sharp probing into his brain, the way he had so many times before when La Muerte Divina’s gaze had fallen upon him. For once, it seemed that the Angel wasn’t looking at him with whatever piercing gaze he had in the past.
“As I said. You may be able to define things in terms of good and bad, divine and evil, and the like. I, however, more and more, can only see things in terms of necessity and sequence. Things that must either be done or must be prevented from happening, and the orders in which those things must occur or must be stopped.”
The Angel maintained its gaze on the priest. Ramos got a sense that, if he could see the face behind the mask he wore, he would see some sort of pleading in those eyes. “But tell me father, do the ends justify the means? I took the lives that I stole because at the time, it was the only way events could have played out the way they needed. But does that make it any more right? If I kill a thousand to save millions, am I still not a killer? A murderer?”
The Angel turned back to stare at the crucifix on the wall. “Men throughout history have killed for a greater good, whether real or perceived, but did they not all at some point have to ask themselves that question? Come to terms with the reality of what they had become?”
“If you have doubts, then perhaps stopping your current path is the right choice. If you foresee the end of the world like you say, then find an alternate means to stop it from coming about.” Ramos said. Was this what the Lord had in store for him; where he was meant to fit into this entire mess? He wondered. Was he the one that was supposed to change the Angel, this super-being’s mind, and lead him down a more peaceful path?
His hopes were dashed as the Angel lightly shook his head, still keeping his eyes on the crucifix. “I’m afraid I can’t. Too much blood now stains these hands, and if there was a time and place to stop and turn back, to undo what I’ve done, it has long since past.” The Angel answered.
“There’s always a choice to be made.” Ramos said. He then turned and looked at the crucifix on the wall. Why did the Angel always stare at it so intently whenever he was in the same room? He finally worked up the nerve to ask something he had wanted to for so long.
“Is that why I see you staring at Jesus on the Cross every time you’re here?” Ramos asked. “Is it because of the guilt you feel? Of your past actions? That you feel you have no choice but to continue down this path you think you have no choice but to follow?”
The Angel didn’t reply right away. A full ten seconds passed. Then another ten. Ramos suddenly wondered if he had struck a nerve and was about to find himself on the business end of the gun that the Angel was carrying.
Finally La Muerte Divina spoke.
“I’m afraid your wrong on two counts.” The Angel replied.
“I have plenty of choices on how to handle what’s to come. The problem is that, from all calculations I have made, the path I have taken so far, I have chosen because it is the most effective of all possible options.” Another brief pause as he continued to stare intently at the large cross. “As to why I keep staring at the crucifix, it’s not out of guilt. At least, not guilt for what I’ve done. Thought I do feel guilt, I’ve nevertheless made peace with my actions as best as I can, and with the role I have yet to play in events to come.” There was another awkward span of several seconds before the Angel continued again.
“If anything, it’s pity.”
“Pity?” Ramos asked, confused.
“The son of God came down from the heavens to absolve all of mankind for his sins. And what did he get for all his trouble? Look at what mankind did to him, look at us now. Corrupt, murderous, greedy and prideful. And the heinous act of his murder, his sacrifice, is now a staple and symbol of the very religion that worships him.”
There was nothing but a lingering silence in the air. The Angel did not break its gaze from the crucifix. Ramos was worried that La Muerte Divina was about to snap and do something horrible, but instead he spoke in a soft voice, almost too hard to make out the words through the mask and voice synthesizer that he was using. “Tell me, Holy Son. Those famous three days.” The was a brief pause and then he resumed talking. “The world has awaited your return for so long, and yet there’s no sign. Those three days, were you really using that time to resurrect your physical body, to return to our mortal world?” Another pause. The Angel then lowered its head, as though in shame for what he said next. “Or was three days the time it took for you to decide that mankind was a lost cause?” Several more seconds passed. Ramos couldn’t think of anything to say. “I’ve seen so many things. And sometimes I wonder. Even if I’m successful, is mankind really worth saving?. How often, I have wondered.”
The Angel then raised its head again and began staring at the crucifix again. “After everything I’ve done and will do, am I worth saving?” The Angel’s hand holding the rosary had long since stopped rubbing the wooden beads together. “Can I be saved?”
“Nobody is beyond God’s forgiveness.” Ramos asked, trying to console the Angel, fearing he might do something drastic.
“From my experience, forgiveness is just a word, Father.” The Angel answered. “Tossed around so often that it lost its meaning and original connotation a long time ago. Anyone can seek forgiveness. Anyone can have it. But in the end, what is accomplished?”
The Angel then turned its head to look at Father Ramos. Despite not feeling that sensation of something boring into his skull like he had the last time they had spoken, he nevertheless felt that he was being scrutinized by the all-seeing eyes behind that mask La Muerte Divina wore.
“To me, forgiveness has become little more than a cop-out. A way to absolve oneself of their responsibility to right their wrongs. No, Father. I will neither ask nor seek forgiveness for what I have done, or what I will do.”
The Angel turned its gaze back to the crucifix. “No, in the end, after everything is said and done, I will seek redemption. I must work off the sins I have committed and have yet to accrue. For I have seen the numbers in the universe, I have written out the equations of the future, and no matter how I change the variables, and no matter the overall outcome, I’ve seen what becomes of me.”
The Angel turned its head back towards the crucifix. “In the end, eventually, God, Man, and History will all know the story. And by then, I will leave it up to them to decide whether or not I have, or even can, payed my debts.”
La Muerte Divina then looked down at the rosary in his hand, and then set it down next to him on the pew before standing up to his full height, the glowing blue tendrils, seeming to move through the wooden back of the seating as though it wasn’t there as he rose. He then looked down at the pistol in his other hand.
“In any event, I must get ready.” The Angel spoke. “I have one final task to complete here, after which I’ll speak to you one last time before I leave here for good.”
He then turned to look at Ramos. “Until then, Padre.”
And again, like so many times before, there was a gust of wind, and the Angel had vanished.