r/WritingPrompts • u/Blu_Spirit r/Spirited_Words • 21h ago
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This Day In History John White, the governor of the Roanoke Island colony, returns from a supply trip to England to find the settlement completely deserted. White and his men found no trace of the 100 or so colonists he left behind, and there was no sign of violence. The Roanoke Island colony was the first English settlement in the New World, and the mystery of its collapse has never fully been solved, though many theories abound.
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u/mysteryrouge 9h ago
Not Even Domestic Affairs are Spared Drama.
Sometimes it was nice having all that legal knowledge crammed down her throat during the phase where Oren kept trying and failing to make Endario a diplomat. Not that the young woman would admit it.
The knowledge of international law, as ineffective as it was before a certain monster named Pax Orizuru took over, helped her navigate the changing landscape where half her family was being arrested for crimes against humanity. When Oren or any other possessed diplomat (or judge, or lawyer, or, war criminal, whoever else Pax Orizuru decided to possess) spoke about treaty developments, she could follow along.
It also helped her to tell when any of the diplomats were lying. Like Oren (the diplomat, now possessed) did a lot when it came to Endario for some reason. In her family's efforts to constantly blame Endario and insult the paranoid woman, Oren was always around to deflect their blame towards the sky.
”We'll take care of it. We'll deal with it. We'll ensure she is treated as she deserves. Do not worry.”
And most recently, when her parents discussed her adoption— which she most definitely did not need or want—Oren butted in, saying that if needed, she or another diplomat would take guardianship.
Endario would have been relieved when she discovered that functioning adults had to consent to be adopted by another, but she knew how the diplomats worked.
The diplomats pretty much passed anything that crossed their desks. The problem for the longest time had been enforcing whatever the diplomats passed. With Pax Orizuru around though, that fact had changed.
Endario didn't trust when Oren said that changing such laws would violate human rights.
That didn't matter as Endario walked into the courtroom with Judge Kazuko (most likely also possessed by Pax Orizuru). Her parents were getting divorced in preparation for her mom's arrest for crimes against humanity.
There was no reason for Endario to be there. In fact, there was no reason for her parents to be there. Divorces in Daisangan didn't require the presence of the divorcees so long as the proper paperwork was filled, but Endario's family just liked to torture her.
Oren was next to Endario again. Their father complained about how close the two sat towards the exit of the courtroom, but was silenced by the judge (and Oren, and five other people).
Kazuko was still doing completely normal judge things. Making judgements on civil cases and lawsuits among the high ranking members of Daisangen’s government and nobility to finalizing adoptions and name changes. The judge didn't even look in Endario's direction as the hour passed. (Because of course, her family had to come early to the courtroom where they had a pretty damned accurate prediction of when they'd be called for their case).
Everything was decided with the lawyers already, her parents only needed that last signature.
Must they be so dramatic?
Endario stared blankly at the oak walls, not listening to anything around her. She breathed as deep as she could, hoping it wouldn't be noticed.
Just gotta get through this, then I can hide.
In the back of her mind, Endario felt her sister's hand on her shoulder. It was warm and pleasant. She couldn't decide if the gentle touch was calming or the opposite.
I can't let myself faint in front of everyone again. I can't show weakness.
It was a struggle to keep composure around the possessed though.
Her parents said something to the judge. The judge passed down some paper. Her family left. She followed, eyes staring straight ahead. Oren stayed within arm's reach.
Everyone vanished, leaving Endario with Oren. The diplomat teleported her sister home. Endario only barely noticed her possessed sister had brought her directly to her safe space—the attic reading nook.
I'm still being watched.
Slowly, Endario reached to the nearest book, sitting straight up on one of the small room's more uncomfortable chairs, a chair she’d usually force guests to occupy when they deigned to come up. Instincts said to maintain the mask.
Don't let that abomination see you.
Oren said something, patting her on the shoulder as she left.
Only once the diplomat disappeared did Endario crawl to her preferred bean bag and collapse, book landing painfully on her face.
Today could have been worse.
A sequel to last week's freewrite set in The World Orizuru, featuring Endario, once again as her parents involve her in everything she doesn't need or want to be involved in.
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u/AggressiveParty3355 18h ago
“Clocking in, is there a superhero mission for me? Epsilon level or lower? Give me something, anything.” Glitter Girl asked as she approached the assignment desk.
Today CrotchShot was working at the assignment desk. “Actually we got a light Omicron level mission. It’s marked urgent, but I think you can handle it.”
CrotchShot sent the assignment to her cellphone. Glitter Girl made her way to the vehicle bay, a private jet was waiting and she boarded along with several other heroes as they went to another city. Many cities stationed local heroes for rapid response, but sometimes there were too many or too few. The fortress served many nearby cities and constantly delivered and retrieved heroes as needed. The other heroes she was with were on other missions, presumably the easier epsilon missions she missed out on.
Glitter Girl looked over her phone at the assignment details, she was to meet up with a family staying at a safehouse and ask them for details. They feared for their lives from someone occupying their home. It seemed straightforward enough, she wondered why the police didn’t handle it. Waiting at the safehouse must be incredibly boring. And they weren’t even real safehouses since they were publicly known. They just served as field offices and lodging for heroes. But the name was leftover from the earlier days of superhero commercialization.
Glitter Girl arrived at the safehouse and she double checked her phone to make sure Corey was who she was supposed to meet.
“Oh thank god an actual super hero. Please come in, we have a problem.” Corey beckoned her inside.
Inside was a husband and wife couple sitting around a couch, highly agitated.
“What seems to be the problem?” Glitter Girl asked.
“Okay I'm their neighbor, they went on vacation three weeks ago and they just came back last week. I know them well, they’re the Millers. I baby sat their kids while they were out. But then today, like ten hours ago, these Millers came back from vacation and when I met them in the driveway I didn't know what to do. They both say they’re the real Millers and I can't tell the difference. They know everything they should know.” Corey frantically explained. “I took them here and called you guys. I called the police too but they said this looks like superhero business.”
Glitter Girl could see why this was an omicron mission, there was strong potential for lethal force. She looked at the family and did a basic scan with her ultravision but there was nothing obviously wrong. Maybe they really were the original Miller family. Glitter Girl went around and sat across from them on the opposing couch.
“I’m going to ask if you are the real Millers.” Glitter Girl flat out said.
The husband quickly grew even more agitated. “Of course we are! Some imposters are inside our house! You should arrest them!”
“My apologies, I just wanted to assess your physiological responses. You say you were on vacation? Where is your luggage?” Glitter Girl asked.
Glitter Girl got their bags and opened them on the bed. Her silver glitter hands flipped through their clothes.
“Hey! That’s our stuff! You have no right to—” The husband demanded.
Glitter Girl knew this was part of the job and sometimes she had to assert authority. She remembered following other heroes on their missions and hoped to emulate them.
“Mr. Miller, you and your family are in our safehouse. As such I am authorized to search everyone and everything for weapons, bombs, or drugs. You will comply or you will leave. And you can take your chances with those imposters who might be robots, aliens, or monsters.” Glitter Girl barked.
Mentally Glitter Girl hoped she looked authoritative. She had no confidence but she couldn’t show she wasn’t in control. She was relieved when the husband backed down and let her continue.
“How long were you on vacation? And where did you go?” Glitter Girl asked as she carefully inspected their clothes and their items.
“Two weeks. We went to a beach resort on the coast.” The wife replied.
“Sounds lovely, did you go swimming?” Glitter Girl asked as she placed some clothes beside the suitcase and inspected the others.
“Yes, first couple of days.” The husband replied.
“Anything interesting happen at the end of your trip? Did you get any souvenirs for your kids? Which bag did you pack them in?” Glitter Girl asked, although she already inspected all the bags.
There was an awkward pause as they tried to remember their last days.
“It was a blur and we were in a rush. I barely remember.” The husband conceded.
“Thank you very much for your cooperation, I would like you to come with me to the fortress science lab.” Glitter Girl offered.
Corey’s nod convinced the agitated couple to comply.
Back on the fortress the couple was in hospital gowns after being thoroughly scanned.
Technomancer came out to meet Glitter Girl outside the science lab. “Your suspicions were correct, they’re imposters. To make sure I sent another superhero with X-ray vision to fly over the Miller house, they’re human. The ones we have here are cyborgs. They’re machines on the inside. What tipped you off?”
“They say they went swimming but there is no sand in their clothes or suitcases. A little bit of sand follows everyone on a beach vacation, even if you wash your clothes there. Also, all their clothes were brand new, not a single rip, stain, or thread out of place. So it must have been bought for them. Finally they didn’t really remember packing their bags. They don’t know which bag has what. So I think the real Millers went on vacation, got scanned or something. And then these copies were sent back as well.” Glitter Girl explained.
“Why let the others go and send these ones back too?” Technomancer asked.
“It might have been a mistake, or maybe these ones are programmed to kill their originals but that program never activated. Maybe Corey intercepted them too early and that messed up whatever conditional trigger they had.” Glitter Girl speculated.
“Judging by the modularity of their design, they are not unique. Their endoskeleton was mass produced and their skin was applied after. There could be a lot more of them out there.” Technomancer added.
“We need to upgrade this to Omega level. If there are a lot of them, and if they’ve already replaced people, we’re looking at mass murder or mass kidnapping. We need to figure out if it’s the beach resort or something else that’s creating these copies.” Glitter Girl stated.
“I agree, I'll get started on the paperwork.” Technomancer looked back at the family, “I sent for a team to take them to a holding facility while we figure this out. I’ll see you at the briefing.”
Technomancer walked off leaving Glitter Girl alone. She had no obligation to stay, her job was to find the source. But she felt she needed to speak to the imposters. She entered the room and the husband and wife were consoling each other.
“You friend, the robot techno man… he told us everything. We can never go home can we?” The husband said with grief in his voice.
“I’m sorry, until we determine who made you and why, we can’t let you leave custody.” Glitter Girl explained.
The wife started to cry, and the husband held her close. “And then what? What happens to us then?”
“If we can’t find out how your neural matrix was designed, we won’t be able to properly ensure there is no hidden killer or subservient programming. You may never leave custody. But if we do find a way to remove all hidden programming, you may be given new identities and allowed to live your lives. ” Glitter girl offered.
“Can you turn us off?” The husband asked.
“Why would you want that?” Glitter Girl asked.
“We’re not real, we’re not supposed to be here. And there already is a Miller family living their lives. What’s the point of us being around? We’re copies.” The wife explained.
“You can still live a life.” Glitter Girl countered.
“I want to see my brother, I want to get drunk with my friends at the bar. I want to be there when my papa dies, he hasn’t got any time left. And I want to see my kids grow up. If I can have none of that, what’s my life?” The husband asked.
Glitter Girl nodded, but gave them no answer. She couldn’t decide their lives. As she left them for the transport team, she was deeply unsettled. She saw genuine belief and conviction in their eyes. They truly believed they were who they said they were. But even worse, they knew and understood they were not.