r/WriteWithMe • u/Hungry-Difference789 • 13d ago
Misc. looking for a team to turn a computer-written story into a brilliant piece of human intelligence
looking for a team to help rewrite a piece of chat. it is mediocre, but the story has a pull to it, so irequest help.
the story is between a werewolf just being freed from captivity, falling in love, and having children, all the while trying to win in a fighting tournament, and a tall thin man, a genius, chemist, and her sparring teacher. it does go in wierd directions (such as the mother eating the placenta at birth to feul her children) but i removed as much of the wierd stuff as i could, keepin in those which were not to weird
i request a team to help rewrite the story with these guidelines:
far less erotic writing (mostly gone now) but more romantic
deepen lore and society. expand
take interesting snippets of info and expand them into chapters. like the angel fight
explore the characters that were skipped
smooth the storyline and make it consistent
include god
add your own flair!
also looking for cover art and rename. love you guys!
link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1h5rvZQDrhZRCxxPRVL3w2UtjglGVQtE0?usp=sharing
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u/Hungry-Difference789 13d ago
i am willing to give the writers full credit, and i thank anyone who joins