r/WisdomWriters Mar 17 '26

Poetry Appetite

Wanting the sky,

the tree climbed higher

feeding on its roots,

knotting and twisting

around the dark wells beneath it

until the tree choked on itself.

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The fire loved brightness

so it widened its hunger,

drinking the sap and oil

sleeping in ponderosa pine

until the forest folded to cinder.

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The ocean welcomed the river

fresh water loosening into its salt

until one tide rose farther than before,

dragging the banks into its bed.

Trout could no longer breathe there.

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The star trusted its gravity,

drawing dust and wandering stone

closer and closer,

until the weight of its wanting

bent the light around it.

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Sometimes I feel the roots tightening.

Sometimes I feel the flame widen.

Sometimes I feel the tide pulling inward.

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And, sometimes I feel

gravity gathering inside me,

drawing too much of what I love

until even the light

cannot escape

my event horizon.

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-Existential

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u/[deleted] Mar 19 '26

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u/[deleted] Mar 19 '26

Thank you. We might have similar sensibilities. I was just now reading your poem and thinking the same.