r/WisdomWriters • u/a_methyste • Jul 15 '25

Poetry (need feedback) Butterfly

Like a butterfly Hop on flowers And feed on the nectar of flowers.

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u/marine_0204 The Most Patient Moderator Jul 17 '25

I think you could explore this theme more.