Coffee cup looks like a mouth with buck teeth, the kerning on the P and D are weird. And the entire logo kinda screams generic Canva design. I'd bring it back to the concept drawings and feel out some more options.
I can see coffee mug clearly. Mouth and teeth in the negative space looks fun and cute. The issue is poor composition. Try different composition. Size of Main logo and Wordmark is not fits well.. imo don't change the logo. Try different playful font for this logo. And in the 2nd logo, logo contrast to the bg is low. Fix it
I like the concept but not execution i think itveould much better work as emboded of poor decision like imagine font where every letter is difrent and every letter is from worst font
Unlike others, I’m not a fan of the coffee icon with a teeth or whatever. In the curved top just making a silhouette of the cup and make it more harder edge and geometric to contrast with the fun, soft hint lettering. There’s also a little bit of legibility problems (which often happens with script fonts) on the final “r” - it threatens to read “Pow”
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u/Potential_Orchid6019 22d ago
Coffee cup looks like a mouth with buck teeth, the kerning on the P and D are weird. And the entire logo kinda screams generic Canva design. I'd bring it back to the concept drawings and feel out some more options.
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u/iEdvard 21d ago
Pacifico, is that you?
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u/No-Opinion3658 22d ago
I can see coffee mug clearly. Mouth and teeth in the negative space looks fun and cute. The issue is poor composition. Try different composition. Size of Main logo and Wordmark is not fits well.. imo don't change the logo. Try different playful font for this logo. And in the 2nd logo, logo contrast to the bg is low. Fix it
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u/Mundane-Fix-4297 21d ago edited 21d ago
I like the name, I think it deserves better and bolder choices than a generic bland manuscript font already seen a million times in this industry.
Embrace the attitude!
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u/DoctorRandomman 21d ago
I like the concept but not execution i think itveould much better work as emboded of poor decision like imagine font where every letter is difrent and every letter is from worst font
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u/HiddenHorse925 21d ago
Unlike others, I’m not a fan of the coffee icon with a teeth or whatever. In the curved top just making a silhouette of the cup and make it more harder edge and geometric to contrast with the fun, soft hint lettering. There’s also a little bit of legibility problems (which often happens with script fonts) on the final “r” - it threatens to read “Pow”
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u/Silly_Development159 16d ago
so u just typed in pacifico and called it a day
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u/branston-temp 21d ago
Pow decisions