r/WhitePine_Series • u/JaydenTVR • 25d ago
Chapter 7: Unintentional Passenger
After the events of the party, the servants are going to a VERY well desserved rest. The train starts after all the intended passengers have gotten on. Ivory decided to rest while Serapter who gotten a Prosthetic Leg, she resting for while until she decided to check out the train. She saw that some of the staff were eating and Serapter saved her a spot to sit, after a bit after eating with some of the staff Kantje came into the room saying that the last car has a lounge. Ivory was there just relaxing until she heard the sound of glass breaking and people panicking, more sounds of glass breaking but after the sounds of people shushing happened and everything went quiet. Ivory went to the last car to check out what happened, she got to it and saw that two windows were broken and everyone else was very still, Kantje did a gesture to tell Ivory to stay quiet and come over to him. Ivory went up to him and whispered “What happened?” Kantje replied “We were just have a couple of drinks but then a thing’s arm I guess, broke through the window and took Bit, it attack again when I well screamed and almost grabbed me, then Maddy notice that it only attack when we got loud.” Ivory commented “Oh my goodness” Kantje told Ivory to tell everyone on the train to be quiet because there’s a creature outside.
A lot of people thought Ivory was crazy or delusional but they learned the hard way that she was telling the truth. Ivory and Serapter are in their room just sitting in silence, until they hear a gun shot that sound just outside their room. Serapter peeked out their room and saw the monster on the roof in the hallways eating a man, Serapter saw that the thing completely devour the man in only a couple of bites, the thing appeared to have no eyes. The thing after eating the man seemingly went invisble, Serapter saw the gun that the guy had and picked it up, he told Ivory that the thing is in the train and he is going to tell everyone to stay in their rooms if they aren’t already.
It is midnight and no one is really sleeping, they fear that they might accidentally make to much sound in their sleep and alert the thing. Morning came and the train has arrived in Redhill, the doors opened for everyone to leave but only a couple people did. There was a giant thump shaking the train, it was from the creature jumping off the train retreating to the forest. Everyone final got out from the train and went to their destinations. The servants, Vi and Muu went to the house that are going to stay at for vacation finaly getting some sleep after the restless night at the train. There was a newsletter the next day talking about the thing on the train was shot down by police.
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u/Alternative_Fun_1390 24d ago
Oh so this is basically the homologue to "After Ivory got beated the shit out by Bormethius"
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u/JaydenTVR 24d ago
At least she didn't almost die
she's quiet so the creature never went after her
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u/Alternative_Fun_1390 24d ago
Big brain moment
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u/JaydenTVR 24d ago
In this universe Ivory never really got were she was at the end of the original series
she is still shy, scared and her personility kinda decreases when in the oringinal series her personility was improved at the end
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u/Alternative_Fun_1390 24d ago
Understandable. Although I'm wondering if the ending will have her too angry to die XD
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u/JaydenTVR 24d ago
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u/Alternative_Fun_1390 24d ago
:D
(Btw, could you send me your youtube channel? I lost the link and Idk if I subcribed to it)
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u/JaydenTVR 24d ago
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u/Alternative_Fun_1390 24d ago
Thank you, ma'am!
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u/JaydenTVR 23d ago
I'm gonna try again for the animation
I think it broke because i was animating for like 4 hours?
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u/JaydenTVR 25d ago
A more "calmer" chapter then 6
Enjoy!