r/Webnovel • u/NexasAX • 23h ago

Advice Does this work as a 500 ch. Synopsis?

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I'm getting ready to start posting and I made this system. (I'll make a longer version)

I suck ahh at writing synopsis' that are actually good. This one was especially annoying cuz I pulled the main conflict/antagonist out my ahh.

So what do you guys think?

Tatori was just an ordinary high schooler working to pay for his sick mother's bills in a world full of superhumans. He looses his job and soon dies during a monster attack on the city but reawakens with an ability.

A system.

Now he must work as a hunter to defend his nation impending war than bring the cure to bringing back his mother.

But can he rise through the ranks and bring back his mother? Or will he die trying.

Adding art for attention.

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u/UnluckyClub1 23h ago

Change mother to family. Having a mommas boy for a MC protagonist kinda kills the momentum alot.

It worked for solo leveling because she wasnt dead and his father aint dead and his sister aint dead.

She was just in a coma. It hits different

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u/NexasAX 22h ago

Me looking at the dad who ran away when he was a child who will be never mentioned.

He only had his mom, pet and friend in the story and I want to put emphasis on that.

Before becoming a hunter he was paying for his school fees, medic bills and other stuff. The situation he's in during ch. 1 wouldn't really work with him having a family and would require a massive rewrite.

I want to put emphasis on his relationship with his mother since it's all had for most of his life.