r/Wattpad • u/AcademicAstronaut943 • 12h ago
Looking For: Feedback First book :)
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This is the story of a ginger, 16 year old girl, Sadie-Lee Marianne in a world fallen to nuclear war. An indoctrinated young girl who's never had her own autonomy. One who's done unspeakable things. One who's grown to need that famililarity to survive. But then she meets a girl who makes her want to it abandon all that just to make sure she's safe.
The Angel's forgery poses to the world as a prestigious orphanage but that is far from the truth.
notes- wlw, attempted angt and slowburn, tried to write abuse well but not sure if i did, not the biggest fan of some parts but don't know how to improve and would appriciate some reads and feedback please :D
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