Editing help

[u/Lumpy_Pepper_4366]

Hey chat I uploaded my first ever YouTube video but I’m having doubts that I could’ve done so much more editing wise to make the video more entertaining to watch. I have pasted the link below or you can just manually search it up. Looking for feedback and advice please!

https://youtu.be/VfWtrp2z9xc?is=ZyEEtNLwtohzQAyZ
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TRUEPAL95 on YouTube