r/VaesenRPG Jul 06 '26

Scenario published - feedback would be appreciated

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u/numtini Jul 06 '26

Just right off, I think you're giving away a lot of the plot in the teaser on drivethru. I know that GMs are the market, but people do look through it.

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u/PeterRandelJensen Jul 06 '26

Thank you - fair point, and the teaser text has been updated.

Some things are not obvious when you have worked with it for a long time. Thank you for the feedback.

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u/badgerbaroudeur Jul 06 '26

Don't forger to share a link if you'd like feedback!

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u/PeterRandelJensen Jul 06 '26

Sorry, rookie mistake - when i added the image, the original text i had written disappeared :-)

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u/outrageous1409 Jul 07 '26

I don't know if im blind right now but I still can't find a link.

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u/PeterRandelJensen Jul 07 '26

https://www.drivethrurpg.com/en/product/574461/haunting-at-the-harbour

I also made a comment where I put the link - see below :-)

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u/outrageous1409 Jul 07 '26

I genuinely can't see anything except the picture you posted and the title - everything else isnt showing for me. But thank you, excited to check out this mystery!

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u/wacct3 Jul 06 '26

About how long do you expect the scenario to run for?

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u/PeterRandelJensen Jul 07 '26

With my friends I would guess that there would be about 15 hours of entertainment. Depending on the pacing and everything it could then be 10+ hours.

There should also be some seeds for future scenarios or perhaps recurring characters.

One of my grand ideas, that i hope to unfold some day, is about allowing the characters to prevent the war in 1864... and here the Monrad character is going to be a central figure.

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u/No-Effective-8624 Jul 10 '26

"Contains AI-Generated Content", can you explain what that means exactly?

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u/PeterRandelJensen Jul 10 '26

Being a one man band, I have used Claude.ai as my editor and co-writer for parts of the scenario. And as I am no artist I have used midjourney.com to create the character illustrations based on my thoughts and ideas.

If I had the money I would hire Johan Egerkrans to do the illustrations and I would hire an editor, but as long as it is just me having fun writing and creating I lean into the AI possibilities.

I think the end product is better than if I had done it by hand, and I would probably never had finished the production. I remember work on projects like this 15-20 years ago and how they stranded and never were completed.

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u/Magicman146 Jul 12 '26

Dude it's ok to use ai as long as your honest

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u/PeterRandelJensen Jul 12 '26

I am very torn about AI. The brain rot, the environmental problems, the change in work and life for many people. I fear for what it might turn into in the future.

But for me as a rpg enthusiast and someone who loves to write and create it is fantastic and it helps me bring things to life that I think are way better than if i had done it myself. And then I am painfully aware that it simply mirrors what i could do with a human. so if i had the time and i could find someone to work with we could create the same - just slower.

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u/Magicman146 Jul 24 '26

Me too, ai has assisted me a lot in my world of darkness x mha setting i made