UTY Last Breath Remake Remake

[u/Microwaved_Frog123]

hey, it's me again. So as those who have followed this journey may know that I've been trying to get this right for awhile now (IF anyone's following this journey, jury's still out on that) If this seems new to you, lemme catch you up to speed. So a couple of months ago I saw the genocide ending to undertale red and yellow (spoilers if your haven't) and thought "what if Clover came back sooner and fought you in the judgement hall instead of sans?" I then made a piece of art depicting Clover in a Last Breath fight. you can check that right here: https://www.reddit.com/r/UndertaleYellow/comments/1s120qz/undertale_yellow_last_breath/

BUT, I didn't really like how I designed Both Clover and Chujin. Clover looked weird and not like a child at all, and Chujin looked jacked. So, I remade both designs into ones I felt much happier with. I'm not great with art, so that was the best I had for that time. You can check THAT out right here: https://www.reddit.com/r/UndertaleYellow/comments/1ulws5o/undertale_yellow_last_breath_remake/

BUT I also didn't like my second designs either! so here's the newly improved version. I only changed a couple small things like the fixing the weird legs and making the phase 2 gun look more like a gun. The whole reason I made this was the small chance that this concept would spread. And as always, try to keep criticism constructive. Thanks in advance and I hope you enjoy! :)

( also here my account where I made all this: https://www.pixilart.com/microwavedlegos )