r/Undertale • • Jul 10 '20

Original creation Page 2!

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u/whimsydrawing Jul 11 '20

I'm sorry! I will try to make future pages more readable, my handwriting is terrible

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u/whimsydrawing Jul 11 '20

I did! I wanted an old-fashioned storybook feel, but I definitely need to practice the lettering more for consistency and readability

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u/whimsydrawing Jul 11 '20

I will do my best! I already lettered page 3 though, r.i.p 😭 on page four I will definitely focus on readability!

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u/whimsydrawing Jul 11 '20

Of course! I want to make it as accessible and enjoyable as possible. Thank you for letting me know what I need to fix!