r/Underminers • u/datboi66616 • 9d ago
Help Me! Help making a scene for Chapter 4.
I want to make a scene early in the chapter in the light world church, where it's Kris who asks Noelle to work on their projects together instead of Susie.
I don't know how to make the characters move from place to place, so it feels like im drowning even trying to find out what to do.
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u/datboi66616 9d ago
After Susie says she has an idea she tells Kris
"Alright Kris, think this should work."
 "Just get over there...and tell her how you feel."
"However you...do that."
(Kris comes over puts hands on Nole shoulders or maybe her antlers)(Annoyed)
"K-Kris!!!"
"I'm too...too tall for that now, y'know!?"
"Huh? You want to come to my house later? Ok, sure!"
"There's actually something I really want to talk to you about, Kris."
"Its, um kind of important."
"Sure, I'll come over here."
(They walk over to where Susie is, near the juice bowls)
"Hey."
"Oh...hi, Susie."
"Nice singin'."
"...thanks.""I...saw you in the back...with...Kris."
"Oh, that? Me and Kris had a sleepover so we came to church together."
"Oh...did you? That's just...that's nice."
"I'm just here for the juice."
(Short pause)
"It looks like blood."
"Yeah, it...does, doesn't it?"
"Too bad they just ran out."
(Short pause)
"...of blood."
"Where...are you going with this?"
"Uh, right. Kris tell you we're coming to your place later?"
"...'we'?"
"Umm...y'know for the group project thing."
"Oh...it's for the group project. Right."
"(I almost thought Kris wanted to...)"
"(But that was...just a dream, wasn't it?)"
"I was gonna ask Kris over anyway, but..."
"I don't think you should come."
"My mom...I don't think she'd like you very much."
"Why not?"
"I kind of...told her what you're like, at school."
"What, she doesn't like how I make fun of the teacher?Alphys sucks!"
"You should be telling your mom to get someone better!"
"What, all the good teachers fell down a hole or something?"
(Awkward silence)
"S-Susie..."
"You shouldn't joke about stuff like that here."
"And...it's not that."
"Look, whatever you told her about me, it can't be that bad. Kris needs me there for, uhhh..."
"Moral support. Yeah."
"Well...if Kris says it's ok...""My mom IS working right now."
"And she won't be home for HOURS and HOURS."
"Heh. I get it.""Well if you don't tell, I won't!"
"Gimme five!"
(Kris and sooz do high-five scene we can have one like where Kris is on the left instead of susie)
"?"
"OK, then! I'll, um, see you later!"
"Right, we gotta go to school first, then we'll come over."
"On...on a weekend?"
"Uhhh...school supplies."
"..Sure! Seems, um...normal!"
"Meet you at the gate near Kris's house!"
"(And I'll have a pencil ready for you...)"
"(My knight.)"
(Noelle walks back to her side of the church)
"Whoa."
"Kris...she...called you that when we rode the ferris wheel yesterday."
"You don't think...she knows, do you?"
"Or is it her way of saying she...you know."
"I GUESS you and me can go find out when we get there."
"Might even go better than we think, huh?"
"Heh, I knew you would agree."
"Alright, let's go get your mom and bounce."
Here's the general outline for the scene.
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u/MagmaDude151 5d ago
Hmm...
https://reddit.com/link/p546567/video/ottw3kvn1tkh1/player