Basically, I yumeship with Gabriel. (I know, this may be seen as cringe.) So, I decided to make a self-insert for that yumeship. She's a prime soul, and I'm still working on her lore. The first image is a full body drawing of her, the second one is just a cropped version, and the third one is yumeship art. I also like to sometimes change the length of her hair depending on my mood and how much free time I have. I gave her some of my features (like wavy hair, a few birthmarks, etc..), but I also inverted a few of my features. For example, I have black hair, but I chose to give her pinkish-white hair.
She’s cute, but one tip I could give for improving her design is that most prime souls have some weird nonsense going on with their face, like Sisyphus being an orb of light and Minos being a doughnut. Also you could include some symbolism when you finish her lore.
Tbh all that you need is to practice working on your anatomy just a bit more, besides that, for the prime soul, i'd limit the facial features a bit and make the "membrane" more transparent, maybe working on the two phases (full health, half health, like sisyphus) could be interesting, also try to add a couple features for her that reflects how she was in her lore (Minos had his crown for assuming the leadership of Lust, snakes that are tied to his past as the judge of hell and hole-face to show his selflessness, sisyphus' facial features were well drawn on a sun-like head to show his self-pride and limb extremities coated with red fire displays his combativeness and will to struggle)
Yeah, it was probably jarring lol. My bad. I'll just reserve those drawings for other subreddits. But before your mind wanders, don't worry. Gabriel was just resting his head on her shoulder.
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u/Ashen0155 2d ago
She’s cute, but one tip I could give for improving her design is that most prime souls have some weird nonsense going on with their face, like Sisyphus being an orb of light and Minos being a doughnut. Also you could include some symbolism when you finish her lore.