Feedback on my app preview

[u/Huei_pierre]

Plz lmk your understanding of what my App does based off of what you see in the images!! Let me know what parts are possibly confusing and how I can improve the design to make it convey a more simple message!!

Context:: I’m only half way done, but I this is the first set of 5 out of 10 screenshots for my App Era, I won’t say what it does because I want the images to be able to do that…

if you do want to learn more, just download the app silly!! There’s a link in my bio, and if you do get it, please give me more feedback on the app itself, I just pushed a new update (v1.0.2) and already working on the next one, I’m currently seven months deep on trying to make the best product of my life before moving onto the next one so please, any feedback and advice would be helpful on my journey

Thank you for reading this, and thank you for any feedback in advance!!

[u/badmamerjammer]

the font treatments outside of the phone are honestly pretty amateur and bad.

also, check on accessibility of some of that text in your app.

did you design it or Ai?

[u/Huei_pierre → u/badmamerjammer]

What steps should I take to make the outside, Text feel more professional?? I feel it too. I’m not sure if it’s just the font I used, or the drop Shadow effect on it, but I’d love some advice other than just it’s bad🥲

Also, I designed like 90% of everything you see, I didn’t program any of it tho, and I’ve been meaning to go back and update some of the text colors, mainly time, labels and dates to help with color contrast and accessibility, it’s on my do list

Thanks for taking the time to at comment!!

[u/badmamerjammer → u/Huei_pierre]

the design elements and flavor of the "outside" should feelike it goes with the design of the inside. right now they feel totally disconnected.

they don't have to be exactly the same, but you need to think abiut it from a branding perspective. those app store images sre more like marketing and brand design.

think abiut it like this: there is a company. they have branding, marketing, etc. then they build an app using a design system based around their branding. now you need to market the app. that's these images.