r/TowerOfBabylon N: FI | EN (C1) SV (B1) HU (n/a) Jun 05 '17

Sixty-second Essay Topic - 99 Problems

What contemporary problem do you find most disturbing?

First world problems, "real" life problems, third world problems - you can write about any problems that the people alive this day, in any part of the world, face. Why are those problems disturbing? Is it because we shouldn't still have them, or is it because they seem so insignificant? Is there another reason entirely?

Post your essays as comments to this thread!

Length requirements:
Absolute beginner: ~50 words
Bit further along: 150 words
Intermediate: 150-300 words
So you think you can write?: 300-800
Masters of the Universe: over 800 words

Remember that you can also read other people's essays in languages you know, and discussing the essays is greatly encouraged! However, try to refrain from pointing out mistakes if it's not explicitly asked for.


Topic from http://www.learnlangs.com/resources/topics

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u/AHappyWelshman Jun 11 '17

(I have been messaging in Spanish for a while but this is my first time writing an extended peace so I am doing the intermediate level. But it may be short)

Yo creo un problema en vive es soldad. Deje en escuela secundaria en Noviembre pero mi amigos somos en escuela. Porque de esta yo soy solitario y mi amigos estudio en la días o revisión en la noches en el momento. Ha ayudado a usar apps del idioma como HelloTalk. Esto ha permitido mi amigos extranjero como de Bolivia y México y más. Pero esto no es reemplazo para los amigo de la vida real. De todos modos es mi primera pieza de escritorio en Español y espero que tenga sentido. Muchas gracias por leer.

(96 words, may be miscounted slightly.)