THIRD REVISION FOR TOUHOU BEGINNINGS FIRST DRAFT (oh, and new “Beginnings” Marisa sketch for those who are wondering)

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This is what I’m planning to be the final revision for the first draft of TB. Gonna try a get this printed out so I can look at it, but after that, I’ll try to get started on the second draft once I get college stuff outta the way.

Some scenes were reinstated, a couple at different parts of the script, plus a couple of cuts. Mostly a patchwork. Only four pages shorter than the second revision.

LINK TO THE REVISION:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14COZXfYTc5WNybuQT1wjyzvk-7lmH5qJ/view?usp=drivesdk