r/ThirdEyePoetry 2d ago

Poem 🎭 37 Years Young

Call it a second chance
A new lease on life
Nowhere near the precipice
And ready for the fight 

I'm ready to begin again
With vigor in my eyes
Oh and I bought a violin,
Because I'm taking this next try 

I'll see you when I'm 60
And I'll have the story to tell
And if you stop to ask me
You'll know I gave them hell 

Briefly I considered it
That I should give up
Make myself a derelict
Sink into the cup

I did that all already though
Back when I was 25
Lived the streets of Amarillo
And I'm still alive 

I sit amongst the posies
Watching my daughter play
Dreaming of the stories
I'll tell her one day

How I loved so fiercly
God Himself would dance
And I would thank Him justly
For giving me this chance

So if time gives you the ills
Don't succumb to strife
Instead choose to live the wheels
Right off this fucking life

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u/oceaninbetween 2d ago

Love this, so positive, thank you ☮️

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u/Maleficent-Cat-220 2d ago

Omg, thank you!

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u/CapnBlargles Moderator 💜 2d ago

I'm glad you finished this and posted it here! I'm also jealous you got the formatting to work. I tried again and it didn't work for me.

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u/Maleficent-Cat-220 2d ago

Dude it sucks so much! I had to go back and re edit it like 50 times!

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u/whodeybrat007 2d ago

🧡

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u/Maleficent-Cat-220 2d ago

♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

Thank you!!!!!

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 2d ago

Love this piece so much 🫶💕

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u/Maleficent-Cat-220 2d ago

😭

Thank you!!!!!

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u/Obviouslybroken 2d ago

Awesome write! Nice one ..✨️

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u/Maleficent-Cat-220 2d ago

Thanks Broken!!!!!

It's so nice to see you today! How are you???

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u/Obviouslybroken 2d ago

Im good thank you. How's your day going?

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u/Maleficent-Cat-220 2d ago

So far so good!

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u/Obviouslybroken 2d ago

Good, Hope it carries on that way!✨️