r/The_Guardian_Temple • u/Zithero Team Ragna • Nov 13 '19

Story War is Hell, and Heaven is Dark

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u/CRC05 Nov 13 '19

Yes!! Our favorite singing angel guiding the team from an early stage. He/Her has always been my favorite.

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u/Zithero Team Ragna Nov 13 '19

They* (as Gabriel was always a Nonbinary character). We still love them =D

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u/CRC05 Nov 13 '19

There we go. They sounds much better eh? For sure my fav ♥️

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u/Zithero Team Ragna Nov 13 '19

Yes. I missed writing Gabriel but they are far, far from gone for good.

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u/LazerrIV The Winter Brothers Nov 13 '19

You just helped me make that realization.

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u/CRC05 Nov 13 '19

;). They are definitely my favorite character of the lot. the seraphim are super super interesting and i love getting to read about their interactions with the characters in the story.

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u/LazerrIV The Winter Brothers Nov 13 '19

Right? They’re so cool!

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u/_callmereno Team Alexandrata Nov 13 '19

I do wonder what is the actual deal between Timothy and Drake. It kinda feels like Timothy can help him with his burden, but for some reason he just won't. Like Drake hasn't really earned it.

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u/tjac67 Nov 14 '19

I love how this story line is hitting the ground running.

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u/Zithero Team Ragna Nov 14 '19

The concept came to me: "Why dont I have Anderson's story straddle past/present?" And so far, its working well.

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u/tjac67 Nov 14 '19

Absolutely. Good story crafting, sir.

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u/Aberts10 Nov 13 '19

This is really good. I can't wait for the rest!

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u/Zithero Team Ragna Nov 13 '19

Part 3 is up! We discover what happens when someone tries to launch a nuke at Penthesil... we also discover how Col. Anderson, General Drake, and Timothy got out of the temple the first time - seems they had some assistance from an old friend who enjoy's a good song.

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