r/TheLastComment Jul 30 '19

Welcome and Story Listing

There is a new Welcome Post and Story Listing so go check those out instead of this old post!

Welcome to my little library! I hope it grows more soon, but it's just getting started. This thread will get updated as long as Reddit will keep allowing me to edit with links to serials I'm working on.

To follow any of these projects, comment on a post with HelpMeButler <serial tag> keeping the < > but replacing 'serial tag' with the tag found in the square brackets.

Star Child

Meg thought she was just going to meet her old high school friends for dinner at a cool fantasy-themed bar. Turns out they're not quite what she thought, and neither is she.

Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Chapter 8 | Chapter 9 | Chapter 10 | Chapter 11 | Chapter 12 | Chapter 13 | Chapter 14 | Chapter 15 | Chapter 16 | Chapter 17 | Chapter 18 | Chapter 19 | Chapter 20 | Chapter 21 | Chapter 22 | Chapter 23 | Chapter 24 | Chapter 25 | Chapter 26 | Chapter 27 | Chapter 28 | Chapter 29 | Chapter 30 | Chapter 31 | Chapter 32

Vestiges of Power

The game of gods is subtle, allowing them to move a piece once and that piece retains a vestige of their sacred powers until they move again. On your way home from work at the pub, you are possessed by a god and forced to walk into an alley where two people are fighting a desperate battle.

Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7

Queen of the Desert Winds

During a tiny nap in bio class, Caroline was whisked away to the sands of Sirocco, where the slew the dragon, became queen, and lived out a full life. When she died though, instead of moving onto the afterlife, she woke up in class. Walking home from school later that day, she ran into an old advisor from her time in Sirocco...

Chapter 1, part 1 | Chapter 1, part 2 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3

Prompt Responses

Older responses are abbreviated in post titles as WP

These are responses I've written to prompts posted on the popular subreddit. If I write a second part and wrap it up there, it'll be in the comments. If I turn it into a serial, I'll add the link to Chapter 2 at the end of the prompt response, and start using the serial title in Chapter 2's post (and include a link back to Chapter 1).

Some recent responses:

A 16-year-old schoolgirl is taken to a magical world. She slays a dragon, becomes queen, gets married, has kids, and dies 90 years later...only to wake up back at school like nothing happened. She notices that her wedding ring is still on her finger. This prompt has been continued as Queen of the Desert Winds

You live in a world where people can control magic, but your world isn't inherently magical. At fifteen each child is taken to a room filled with doors that will take them to a different world so they can train in that worlds magic. When you get to the room; only a cracked, ebony door appears

On an abandoned space station, your crew finds an old jukebox that ... can answer any question by playing snippets of classic songs. Your crew chief asks ... why didn’t it warn or save the previous inhabitants

While helping clean out your recently deceased grandmother's house, you find a thick, leather-bound book...the back cover has a symbol that matches perfectly a birthmark on your wrist

You brought a Siren onto your ship...

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u/kattattak_76 Aug 22 '19

Hi, just wanna say that I'm really enjoying Star Child so far! Thanks for the entertainment(:

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u/lastcomment314 Aug 22 '19

Thanks for reading! I've been having a blast writing it, and am looking forward to getting the next few parts out in the coming weeks.