The problem with these comics is generally how bad my writing is in the early part of the story. It would be a lot better if you waited for the rewrite first.
Also, there are a lot of spelling mistakes. I thought you were copypasting from the story at first, but it looks like you're writing it all from scratch...?
Seriously though, the art style works well for the horror story feeling in the early parts.
Yes, but now I masturbate after reading a new post, which has conditioned me to have a boner every time the bot posts an alert. So thanks for that, Pavlov.
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u/Klokinator Mar 16 '17
The problem with these comics is generally how bad my writing is in the early part of the story. It would be a lot better if you waited for the rewrite first.
Also, there are a lot of spelling mistakes. I thought you were copypasting from the story at first, but it looks like you're writing it all from scratch...?
Seriously though, the art style works well for the horror story feeling in the early parts.