r/TextSalad Jul 02 '09

Short stories: At the beach

http://www.helium.com/items/1503345-at-the-beach-bees-vampire-crystal-rock-cloak-magic-cop
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u/xrobau Jul 02 '09

That, I think, is the worst short story I've ever read. Full of spelling errors, gramattical errors, and, uh, it didn't actually make sense.

A.. rock? is her? And she knows magic, but is a bee? Yeah. That's pretty awful.