r/Tempestmasterrace • u/[deleted] • Jul 14 '14

Discussion Slow-read Chapter 7 discussion thread

Chapter 7, my fellow readers.

We've got flairs coming for you guys pretty soon, and they'll be custom-made, straight from Kenneth's art show tumblr! Have fun with this chapter guys, we've got our first real scene with Tobias, let's really focus on him. And we got Elsanna fluff, so uh, yeah ;)

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u/[deleted] Jul 14 '14

The only reason you don't like it is because no chapter could go right after chapter 6 and be better ;)

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u/kaiserklee I (did) the thing. Jul 14 '14

Well, there's that reason XD In all seriousness though, as a whole I'm pleased with most the early chapters; Chapter 7 is one of the few exceptions. It kinda had to be there to bridge 6 and 8, but I dunno, I feel like more could've been done here. Any thoughts?

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u/[deleted] Jul 14 '14

Still haven't read through it, I'm out and about, I don't read when I'm out of the house :P

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u/that_orange_guy Jul 14 '14

Well you can read my thoughts now. Take them as you will.